Friday, October 29, 2010

dialoge and scene

Scene

imagine your on a bus in down town new york. normal bus lots of people krappy seats. and in the middle of this bus there seems to be an arguement between a young black man and an old white about who is gonna shine the other guys shoes. when the old white guy says ( it could be a china man it dont matter).

 Characters :
black guy = Cleetis the hillbilly who talks in a ridiculous accent
Old white Guy= Marvin; the racist old coot that likes to steal peoples Rides


 Dialoge

 Cleetis: Yo FoO i Aints shyin yos Shos
 Marvin: doesnt matter anymore any way i already sold yo ride
Cleetis: Yous souls Ma RiGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Marvin: yep i got three dollas suckka
 Cleetis: ima Punch Yos ElbOws FooooOOO !!!!!
Marvin: ya right you dont have it in you to punch an all man now shine My shoes
 Cleetis:Hiya FoooOOOooOoOo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
marvin: OWWWW!!! you punched my elbows 
 Cleetis: Ya Nows whas Grampow
marvin: ill teach you whipper snapper
 Cleetis:Brin IT Ons ol man


 Shortly after this dialoge Cleetis was hospitalized with massive head trauma

3 comments:

  1. Ha ha ha. He stole his ride and only got three dollars?

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  2. action: wants his righ
    conflict: marvin sold it
    event: marvin kicks the crap out a cleetus

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